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84

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25,100

Portrayal: 10

Total: 0

Works Cited: 17 (34*)

Care of facts: 10

Maps: 0

Up-to-date: 10

Pict./Illust.: 0

Romanization: 10

Chart/Graph: 0

POINTS: 40

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57

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10,000

Portrayal: 10

Total: 1

Works Cited: 18

Care of facts: 10

Maps: 1

Up-to-date: 9

Pict./Illust.: 0

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POINTS: 15.9

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Xxv, 141, 146

On these and several other pages, "Yi dynasty is used.

Chosön dynasty is preferred. P. 142 mentions Chosön as an alternative to Yi, but it should be the reverse.

Xxviii

Korean might be remotely related to it [Japanese] but it is probably to be classified as Ural-Altaic.

Recent scholarship has settled on calling Korean and Japanese part of the Altaic family; usually Ural and Altaic are thought to be unrelated and are not referred to with the hyphenated term Ural-Altaic andy more. On page 145, with the exception of the hyphenated form, the case is stated correctly.

Xxviii

Seoul...also know as...Kyöngsöng

Kyöngsöng is Korean for the Chinese characters that the Chinese use and pronounce Jingzhang, and the Japanese pronounce Keijo. No one uses the characters for the Korean pronunciation Kyöngsöng. Delete the term.

Xxviii

Before 1948 called Corea.

Should be, called Chosön.

141

Kolisuchök

Korisuchök (Paekch'öng would be better)

141

Yangmin [for scholar-gentry class]

Should be yangban for scholar-gentry class; yangmin means the commoners, the same as sangmin mentioned in the text.

143

Necha (puppeteers), macho (gamblers) are misromanized, dosa (butcher) is inaccurate

Butcher should probably be tosalcha. Necha and macho are not possible in the romanization system (neja or nech'a/ majo or mach'o) and are not found in dictionaries either.

147

5 percent extra is given to the eldest son in inheritance divisions.

Should be 50 percent, or one share and a half, extra.

147

93 percent literacy

98 to 99 percent of the population are literate.

147

Some genealogies recently published...list female members.

Unclear what is intended; should probably say, "some genealogies recently published list the descendants of female members of the lineage; whereas earlier practice was to list only the daughter's marriage data, but to exclude data on the posterity of the daughter.

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Map 2: East Asia, North and South Korea represented.

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55

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5,500

Portrayal: 10

Total: 14

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Care of facts: 10

Maps: 3

Up-to-date: 10

Pict./Illust.: 11

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POINTS: 8.8

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None found.

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285

Map of the ceramic trade route with Korea included.

295

Map of Korea and Japan in the Paleolithic and Meolithic periods.

299

Map of the route Buddhism took in getting to Japan with Korean included.

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294

The site of Sokchangni, Korea, a paleolithic discovery in Korea.

297

Needles and fishhooks from Korea.

297

Pottery with comb decoration from Korea.

298

Painting from the wall of a tomb entitled, the "Black Warrior."

298

Painting from the wall of a tomb entitled, the "Red Phoenix."

299

The interior of King Muryöng's tomb, Kyöngju, Korea, AD526

299

Gold crown from the great tomb of Hwangnam, Kyöngju, Korea, 5^th-6^th C.

299

Pottery figurine of an imaginary animal from Michuwang-nüng, Kyöngju, Korea, 6^th C.

300

A small ornamental plaque in gilded bronze.

302

Plans of the remains of the mansetery at Ch'öngamni near P'yöngyangm Korea.

302

Tile from Sach'öngwangsa monastery at Puyö, Korea c. mid-6^th century.

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51

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1,600

Portrayal: 8

Total: 30

Works Cited: 0

Care of facts: 9

Maps: 26

Up-to-date: 9

Pict./Illust.: 1

Romanization: 8

Chart/Graph: 3

POINTS: 2.6

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80

[Map] conquered and put under Chinese administration 109-106 BC.

Military outposts established 109-106 BC [there is no evidence of wide-spread control or conquest]

165

The restoration of Korea to vassal status.

With the establishment of a new dynasty in Korea, the Chosön, China and Korea returned to normal tributary relationships.

165

The Chinese sent huge armies to aid their vassals.

The Chinese sent huge armies in accordance with their tributary state obligations.

165

[Map] Japanese invasions of Korea under Hideyoshi 1582, 1592, 1597-98.

Delete 1582

170

The Manchus of the Ch'ing dynasty invaded Korea, reducing it to vassal status...

The Manchus of the Ch'ing dynasty invaded Korea, demanding that it accept Manchu supremacy and enter into a Chinese style tributary relationship.

347

[Index entry] Korea...conquered by China 80/3, 125/2.

Chinese military outposts in Korea.

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73

Religious map of the world with Korea included.

80

Map of Asia with Korea listed as being under Chinese administration 109-106 BC.

81

Map of the Han dynasty with Northern Korea (Lo-Lang) listed as a commandery.

124

Map of Asia with Korea represented.

125

Map of Asia with Korea when it was the Shilla kingdom.

125

Map of China with Korea peninsula when it was Koryö.

127

Map of the disruption of the Mongol Empire after 1259, Korea represented.

165

China during the Ming period when the Mings counter-attacked the Japanese to defend Korea.

171

Manchu expansion map, includes invasion of Korea and vassal status in 1637.

228

Fall of the Chinese Empire with Korea shown.

229

Map of China with Korea represented.

238

Map of the Russo-Japanese War, Korea represented.

239

Map of China with Korea represented.

241

Map of Colonial Powers in 1914-Korea represented.

258

The Northern Expedition of China 1926-6 - Korea represented.

258

The Nationalist (Kuomintang) regime of China (1928-37).

259

Chinese Communist movement to 1945- Korea represented.

259

Communist victories of China-Korea represented

266

Map of Japanese empire 1941-45-Korea included.

267

The Allied counter-offensive - Korea included.

274

Population density in East Asia from 1945 - Korea included.

274

The Korean War map.

275

Detailed map of Korea and Japan.

293

World map with Korea represented.

294

Map of the World in the 1990's - Korea included.

295

Map of European Foreign Direct Investment - Korea included.

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165

A Ming naval ship in the defense of Korea.

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239

Growth overseas: Japanese acquisitions 1875-1918.

294

Chart of the world's population growth.

294

Gross National Product per capita in 1991.

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51

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9,500

Portrayal: 9

Total: 0

Works Cited: 46

Care of facts: 8

Maps: 0

Up-to-date: 8

Pict./Illust.: 0

Romanization: 6

Chart/Graph: 0

POINTS: 15.1

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5

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491

• North Korea's President: Kim Ir Sen
• Roman-Catholic Primate: Kim Son Hwa
• South Korean currency: 1 won = 100 chon

• North Korea's President: Kim Il Sung
• Roman-Catholic Primate: Kim Soo Hwan
• Chon [chön] is no longer used.

494

Korea War

Korean War

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48

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3,300

Portrayal: 9

Total: 19

Works Cited: 0

Care of facts: 10

Maps: 6

Up-to-date: 8

Pict./Illust.: 8

Romanization: 6

Chart/Graph: 6

POINTS: 5.3

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439

North Korea in relation to Asia.

440

• North Korea, in relation to China, the USSR, South Korea, and Japan.
• South Korea in relation to Asia.

441

South Korea, in relation to China, the USSR, North Korea, and Japan.

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439

North Korean flag.

440

• Christian Mission to the Communist World sends balloons filled with tracts and literature across North Korean and Chinese skies.
• South Korean flag.

441

Korean funeral in a large cemetery, incorporating Shamanist, Buddhist, and Catholic elements.

442

•10th Pentecostal World Conference at the Full Gospel Central Church in Seoul, 1973.
• A choir performance in Hyo Chang stadium during the conference's final rally.

443

• Projected world headquarters of the Unification Church International (Tong-Il).
• Unification Church founder Sun Myung Moon and his wife perform their seventh mass- wedding ceremony.
• True Jesus Church, Korean assembly.

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439

• Table 1: Religious adherents in North Korea
• Secular Data: General information on North Korea

440

• Table 2: Organized churches and denominations in North Korea
• Secular Data: General information on South Korea

441

• Table 1: Religious adherents in South Korea

444

• Table 2: Organized churches and denominations in South Korea

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48

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6,700

Portrayal: 9

Total: 1

Works Cited: 23

Care of facts: 9

Maps: 0

Up-to-date: 9

Pict./Illust.: 0

Romanization: 7

Chart/Graph: 1

POINTS: 10.7

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21

Figure 1: A schema suggesting nine different paradigms on the rural- urban immigration continuum

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1,400

Portrayal: 9

Total: 16

Works Cited: 0

Care of facts: 9

Maps: 13

Up-to-date: 10

Pict./Illust.: 2

Romanization: 8

Chart/Graph: 1

POINTS: 2.2

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17

108 BC: Chinese take control of Korea, establishing military posts.

Chinese established military posts in t he northern parts of the Korean peninsula. [Chinese did not control the whole peninsula, and Korea, as a single entity did not exist at this point.]

18

The Shilla state controls Korea.

The Shilla state unifies the Korean peninsula.

20

[Omission of a major event on the timeline]

AD 1392: Establishment of Chosön dynasty in Korea.

20

AD 1397 Earliest surviving books printed with movable type in Korea.

Should be AD 1234.

21

[Omission of a major event on the timeline]

AD 1592 Hideyoshi (Japanese) invasion of Korea [mentioned in the text on page 266.]

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60

Map of the first Asian Hominids, Korea included.

93

Map of the advent of farming in Asia with Korea represented.

93

Map of the vegetation areas in East Asia, Korea represented.

101

Map of Old World pottery, Korea included.

190

Map of the origins of the Begram treasure, Korea represented.

191

Map of the Silk Road with Korea included.

192

Map of the Eastern and Western Chou in China with Korea represented.

195

Imperial China: Han Dynasty, Korea included.

197

Map of the introduction of rice c. 1000BC, Korea represented.

197

Map of Korea and Japan's early states.

261

Map of the spread of Buddhism, Korea included.

262

Tang China with Korea represented.

265

Map of the recovery under the Ming in China with Korea represented

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197

Diadem with six pendants, from north mound of the Great Tomb of Hwangnam-ni

260

Korean decorated bell used in Buddhist ceremonies. Shilla period, 8^th century AD.

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14-21

World timeline. Several historical events relating to Korea are listed under "East Asia & Oceania."

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40

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5,800

Portrayal: 8

Total: 1

Works Cited: 6

Care of facts: 8

Maps: 1

Up-to-date: 6

Pict./Illust.: 0

Romanization: 8

Chart/Graph: 0

POINTS: 9.2

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601

• The Korean language, borrowed heavily from Chinese and Japanese.
• Hangul had 26 characters when invented in 1446.

• Korean language is definitely not borrowed from Japanese.
• Han'gul had 28 characters when invented in 1446.

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601

North and South Korea -- Major concentrations of Koreans in relation to China, the USSR, and Japan.

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35

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700

Portrayal: 7

Total: 10

Works Cited: 0

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Maps: 8

Up-to-date: 7

Pict./Illust.: 2

Romanization: 7

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POINTS: 1.1

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5

108 BC. Annexation of Korea by China.

Military outposts established in northern parts of the Korean peninsula.

84

393 AD. The Tamato advance into Korea and take over there, at the expense of the Koguryo and Silla kingdoms. Japan seems to have been unified by the Tamato dynasty, ancestors of the imperial clan.

[This is one of the worst cases of distortion we have found. This statement is the worst of the remnant of Japanese imperialist propaganda.] The Yamato clan entered Japan from Korea with superior continental technology that enabled them to conquer the less sophisticated tribes. [...at the expense of Koguryö...is nonsense - Koguryö only controlled territory in the north.]

85

[Map] Mimana (under Japanese control until 562).

Mimana is a Japanese word: the small kingdom should be called Kaya, the Korean word. [Again, the Mimana concept is pure Japanese propaganda from pre WWII times.] The actual case is that this time frame is pre-state formation times. Korea was not Korea, Japan was not Japan. Kaya was a state with strong ties, probably because of migration from Korea to Japan, to one or more of the tribes in Japan. Remember, at the time in question, culture/civilization was moving from China to Korea to Japan, not vice versa.

145

Example of printing at the bottom of the page: Jik ji sim kyong

Korean edition of the Buddhist sutra Chikchi simgyöng [the heart sutra].

286

In Korea and Indochina the confrontation became an armed one. 1956 was a pivotal year.

The Korea War, 1950-53, was more pivotal than obscure crisis in 1956. The Korean War was the first flare-up of the Cold War-needs more coverage here.

302

1894: Japan annexes Korea.

1910: Japan annexes Korea [elsewhere in the text, p.235, p.254, this date is given correctly].

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Map of Asia 250 BC - AD 220 with Korea included.

85

Map of Japan and Korea in the 1^st - 12^th centuries.

235

Division of the world circa 1900 with Korea represented.

254

Map of Japan with Korean peninsula.

255

1910 After the wars with China and Russia; includes Korea.

273

World Map from 1941-45 with Korea included.

295

Soviet influence in the world at the end of the 1970's with North Korea included.

303

Populations of the world with North and South Korea included.

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145

A Buddhist treatise printed using movable type, 1377, Jik ji sim kyong.

286

Massacres in Korea. Painting by Picasso 1951.

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3,400

Portrayal: 5

Total: 0

Works Cited: 6

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Maps: 0

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POINTS: 5.4

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756

Miryek (Mirük), perhaps Buddhist in origin.

Mirük is future Buddha. It is unmistakably of Buddhist origin.

756

On the 15th day of the 6th moon, people wash their hair at the river in order to remove all misfortunes.

The correct date is the 15th day of the 5th moon (Tano).

757

Temples, kung, and myo are dedicated to different members of the royal family.

The text is dealing with worship ceremonies for the dead. Kung (palace) should not be part of this as it is a place where the royal family used to live.

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